Folies Bel Ami Fridays – Rachel

INTRO – From the occasional series Folies Bel Ami Fridays, your host is the lovely Christina, aka tby789. For those of you who don’t know, she’s been known to write a smutty scene or two, and lucky for you, she is part owner of this blog!

Back in Script Secret #3, we learned that Georges took one of the three coins that made up his entire worth and spent it on the prostitute, Rachel. But all we find out is that there is some door action and we’re left with a (frustrating) fade to black. On special Folies Bel Ami Fridays, tby789 will e x p a n d upon those scenes that have left us a little…anxious for more. *wink*

Without further adéu,  please enjoy the sexiness that follows… after the jump!

The tiny room is dark and dusty; the receding sun stretches along the scarred floor. Muffled voices linger on the stairway, the sounds of horses and passersby on the street below,  filter through the open window. Yellowed, tattered curtains sway in the acrid breeze. The air is thick and sweltering.

Rough whiskers bristle along her jaw and neck, his deft fingers part her skirts and move beneath. The sound of rustling fabric fills the space between them and then suddenly, he is there. He presses – warm and hard – a gasp leaving her parted lips as she’s taken.

Her head rolls, meeting the door with a faint thump as he rocks forward, her body driven up and down the rough wood with each movement. His breath is hot and humid against her skin.

Her hand closes around the gold coin pressed into her palm, the metal cold and heavy against her fingers.

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21 Responses to Folies Bel Ami Fridays – Rachel

  1. aeren says:

    I can´t wait to see Bel Ami ;D

  2. Lynda from Philly says:

    Now that’s more like it!!! Yes. I don’t want to see any fade-to-black and I’m sure everyone agrees! That was hot,I love it. Thanks.

  3. nani says:

    uffff que ganas de más !
    Esa puerte me va a matar xD

  4. Anntastic23 says:

    Jeebus fuckity Christina! First Lo & now you? You two NEEEEEEEED -like, really NEED- to be consulted by the scriptwriters. It’s just a sin that you’re not. I think I’d like this movie much better if I knew you were behind our boy’s moves. ::ass slaps, hi fives:: Well DONE!

  5. Sus says:

    Yes, I think our Christina should write the sex scenes! I was disappointed that the book wasn’t more descriptive!


  6. samrosey says:

    *fans-self* one word – fuckhawt! ok 2 sorta.. but you get the idea :p
    Love it!

  7. parryphrase says:

    That was stimulating… I hope something along those lines is going to happen in this film… It would be a tragedy if they fade all of the sex scenes to black… No cockblocking!

  8. SweetVenom69 says:

    Oh my! Thanks for that little perk this morning. Nothing beats starting off the day with a *ahem* bang. =)
    Thanks, Christina!!

  9. Hellokittee says:

    Christina-Only you can write so beautifully! Your killing me!!!!!

  10. kitttatt says:

    If I wasn’t awake before, all of me is now!
    Thanks, Christina!

  11. gyla says:

    Nice way to warm up a cold morning. I hope things are just like this in the movie.

  12. Damarys says:

    Great let’s hope it is PG 21 (LOL) even if I think it will probably will kill us all ..What a way to go no ?

  13. Rachel says:

    Gotta recover first….gasp*

    I Know my Rob is gona do some justice to this part! can’t wait 4 this scene

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  15. Natalia says:

    I hope Rob checks this blog regularly :), he would definitely get some inspiration from this steamy scene.

  16. Rakka says:

    I think blood just started to ooze from my nose…
    this stuff is hot! XD

  17. robsexme says:

    *throwing a couple coins in the wishing well*
    I wish the sex scenes are captured on screen as vividly as Christina’s steamy description…so hot!!

  18. robsessedtothecore says:

    thanks exactly what his fan base needs, his Holly Hawtness better deliver so we can be somewhat satisfied:) Christina, you rock girl:)

  19. music4debbo says:

    tby789 you write the BEST SEX SCENES of any fan fic writer out there. So beautifully written and so visual and descriptive that you feel like it’s YOU he’s fucking. AMAZING. Beautiful. LOVE IT. HOT. Wish you’d publish “THE OFFICE” in book form, or sell it on iTunes. Has that already happened? Or will it happen in the future? Hope so….

  20. tby789 says:

    Thanks guys, it was my pleasure. ❤

  21. HappyZolushka says:

    I am DIED!

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