Bel Ami: The Orgy Scene!!!

It’s the Folies Bel Ami Friday again y’all! This time it’s The Orgy from The Fourgy! Our own tby789 has written the Bel Ami orgy scene! Okay, okay, so it’s not the *official* orgy scene that has been making headlines, but once news broke about a supposed orgy with Robert Pattinson‘s character we had to do this! Two weeks were spent spanking Miss tby789 into submission! After begging and pleading with her, she finally wrote the orgy scene for you all to have a little something to revisit over the next few months! Get your ShamWow’s handy ladies! No one does smut better than tby789!

Let’s play slip and slide on our plastic chair protectors after the jump!

The Orgy

The sound of music filters out into the summer night.

He enters the Gavotte, nodding absently to the man at the door. Pausing, his eyes fall to the filigreed mask he carries. He considers it for a moment, his thumb brushing along the strange golden face that looks back at him, before slipping it over his head and stepping inside.

The music is louder now, it resonates off the rough stucco walls, rowdy and unavoidable in the cramped space. He steps to the bar and orders a drink, his fingers clinging to the gold coin in his palm, before placing it on the worn wood.

A sugar cube is set atop an ornate slotted spoon, it’s edge perched along the rim of a hazy glass. He watches in odd fascination; the way the cold water cuts through the granules, as each individual drip carves a milky swathe through the peridot absinthe below.

There’s a stage to his left filled with painted ladies; their dresses leaving little to the imaginations of the men in suits and top hats who watch them.

He lifts his glass and drinks. The liquid is cool, yet burns his throat as he swallows. His gaze lifts to the large boxes that rise above the room. The wealthier patrons – their pockets overflowing with coins – sit and look down on the show from a distance. He looks through narrowed eyes to a man in a jeweled mask. The man’s head falls back and though he cannot see his face, he notices the way his body tenses.

A blonde head comes into view momentarily and disappears. He sees the man’s hands twist in her golden hair as she continues to demonstrate her talents before him.

In the corner is a couple kissing. She is pressed firmly against the wall as his hands roam her body. The curve of her breast is visible, like cream and rose petals. Sure hands continue to unlace her bodice and his mouth covers her, their lustful cries lost beneath the sounds of the boisterous crowd.

It is the same everywhere he looks – cloistered couples devouring each other, skin and mouths, hips rocking secretively.

He sees her near the stage, familiar red hair flaming beneath her feathered mask. He beckons to her and she tilts her head, motioning him to follow.

They move behind the faded red of a velvet curtain. He tastes and takes until he is sated in this darkened corner, the sound of voices and sin and the Gavotte all around him.

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24 Responses to Bel Ami: The Orgy Scene!!!

  1. DD says:

    Holy mother of f@ck…love it!

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  3. Judy says:

    OMG I can visualize this happening. OMG!! I can dye my hair flaming red and wear the invisible clothes! O.M.G.

  4. Sus says:

    *Fanning self* Whew!!! tby…do we get nekkid Rob in this scene, or at least some add???

  5. HeidiForReal says:

    Oi.. I’m all flustered now. *fans self* How awesome would some stills from the orgy be, huh? LOL

  6. sissidelyon says:

    Great and hot! But is this Bel Ami or Dorian Gray? LOL

  7. aeren says:

    oh mother of god, I think I’m going to dehydrate … die if we see this scene! thanks from Spain

  8. ihopatz says:

    Rob drinking absinthe in the period costume?!?!*shudder* In a room full of sin?!?! *moan/groan* This movie is gonna die me…

  9. katiebird says:

    Wow Christina!! You are amazing. I could totally picture everything happening right in front of me.

  10. HappyZolushka says:

    Thank you,tby789, you are best!

  11. holdmeransom says:

    very nice! very very nice!

  12. spunksouth says:

    Absinthe = excellent touch!

  13. Lynda from Philly says:

    Oh Mon Dieu! Mon bel ami seduisant sexy! Ceci va etre trop chaud pour manipuler!!!
    Rob,absinthe,hot sex–Oh the visuals!!! Much too much!! Sweet Baby Jeebus & the Three Wise Men, I’m going to die!!!!! That was good, really really hot and GOOD!!!!!

  14. WastingTheMorning says:

    You have mad talent woman!

  15. Kneedshelp says:

    Wow. *breathing heavy* Should not have read at work. Perhaps I could call my hubby for a nooner. Great Job Christina!!!

  16. Natalia says:

    Beautiful writing, bravo!!! Very visual and sensual and I could very well picture the glances, the lust, the atmosphere of this sinful place and all those people melting in heavy desire…

  17. tby789 says:

    Thanks guys ❤

  18. jessedholm says:

    Bow before the greatness people! Cuz that was excellent Christina!

  19. AnastasiaBeaverhausen says:

    “Worn wood”…LOL for that foreshadowing! …honestly, a nice visual of the scene, but the worn wood of the bar as predictive of his future state still has me laughing…

  20. Shelby says:

    Hello!
    I just want to ask you that which are the film locations in Budapest? I suppose they are mostly outdoor scenes but where exactly? Could you help me? Because I really-really want to take pictures with Rob:)
    Thank you so much!

  21. passionsons flower says:

    Thank you tby789 for the visual. When my fantasies of rob start to fall flat you always give me something to work with. You rock sister girl!!!

  22. Sunny says:

    Oh man. This is going to be good!!

  23. Crystal says:

    I don’t remember an orgy scene in the book. What did I miss??

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